The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
You had a couple of grammar errors, but I loved the story. Love like that is becoming all too rare these days. I really enjoyed reading about it.
Your story is a real tear-jerker. I hope it's real because I love this man's loyalty and steadfast commitment. And you did a good job of telling about it.
11/05/06
Just shared this with my wife. Very moving. Thanks.
11/06/06
This was very touching. I like the bank teller part - it shows compassion by those who are outside of the intimate circle. I hope this is true. If not, great imagination!
11/07/06
Delightful, but heart wrenching story. Jesus' love at the coal face. yeggy
11/13/06
Hello dear Debora. Sorry to contact you this way, but I don't have your email and I need to get a bio note from you to go in the next FaithWriters' anthology. Could you send me a quick PM with your email address, and I'll let you know what I need.

By the way, did you know that you ranked 27th overall with this entry, and 10th in Level 3. Very well done! :-)

Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)