The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/06
If we let Him be, the Lord can be our greatest teacher. Thank you for sharing this free verse poem that reads like a prayer from the heart. We can probably all see ourselves in this poem. I especially liked the line about trying to love others, when we don't even love ourselves. There's a great message there. Good job!
11/04/06
Honesty is so refreshing. I liked the spirit of this piece - well done.
11/07/06
I smiled at the line about Enoch walking with the Lord for so long but how the writer feels like they can't walk with God for a day. I can relate! Good poem... thanks for sharing it!
11/13/06
Please post more of your poems at Poetry and Poets of God: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/poetryandpoetsofgod/