The Official Writing Challenge
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11/02/06
Such a charming story and fun to read. A very creative way to share some of the logic of the faith. “No, he has to be a fish ... Not just half-fish and half-special, but fully-fish and fully-special.” Great job!
11/05/06
Very, VERY clever! Love the whole thing - but especially the ending. I started out laughing, but then began to really think about it - and it was still funny! - but very deep (LOL no pun intended). Very cool - I'm putting you in my favorites!
Wow, so simplistic and yet convicting! A very nice re-telling of our need for a Savior. Straightforward enough for childrens' Sunday School or childrens' church, and open-ended enough to encourage adults to seek beyond their comfort zone. Good job with this!! :-)