The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/06
Your punch line was excellent! Love it. The Bible exposition was good and encouraging. I think it could have been improved with a better use of line breaks – or you could even delve into the depths of the forum and work out how to use Bold and Italics. Although the last time I tried that, I got it wrong!
11/04/06
A most interesting read! I liked it immensely; however, I would suggest breaking the l,2,3 etc. into separate paragraphs to make it more reader friendly. Nice job!
11/08/06
This is good teaching. It reminds me of the book A Tale of Three Kings. Powerful. I loved your punch line too. Good job.