The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your story. It could very well be true. A good message on the "unintended impact" that we all can have on the lives around us.
I loved this story! Suspenseful as to the "why", then as to the "What's" Very well done and interesting with a definite point. The last statement, however, doesn't seem to coincide with this endearing story. No argumentive or discipline problem with Sue. But that is just one reader's opinion. Well Done!
Oh, I really liked this! After teaching for nearly 30 years, I hope there are some kids "in the shadows" that I've impacted. Thanks for this encouraging story.
Yes, the quiet ones in the shadows are often the ones we impact the most without realizing it. I would suggest that you be careful about jumping to different points of view. It would help if you put some separation between the first and second paragraphs and between the last and second last. (maybe a couple of asterisks or something?) That would clarify whose mind we are in at the time. At least that's my opinion.