The Official Writing Challenge
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11/03/06
You make some excellent points here! The piece felt a bit unfocused in some places, but that could just be me. It definitely gave me much to think about - and do!!
11/05/06
I would very much like to know more about your experience as a Stephen minister (a term not familiar to me). Consider writing a narrative of those relationships sometime, perhaps?
11/08/06
You really caught my attention at about the third paragraph. That's where I connected with you - because you made it personal. It might be an idea to put that connection first to draw your reader into your lesson. Great thoughts here.
11/09/06
"If we are living our Christian faith, we are a walking lesson plan."

I love this sentence! Very nice piece :)