The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some excellent points here! The piece felt a bit unfocused in some places, but that could just be me. It definitely gave me much to think about - and do!!
I would very much like to know more about your experience as a Stephen minister (a term not familiar to me). Consider writing a narrative of those relationships sometime, perhaps?
You really caught my attention at about the third paragraph. That's where I connected with you - because you made it personal. It might be an idea to put that connection first to draw your reader into your lesson. Great thoughts here.
"If we are living our Christian faith, we are a walking lesson plan."

I love this sentence! Very nice piece :)