The Official Writing Challenge
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A great encouragement to those going through the stuff we call "Life" - good points and well spoken.
11/04/06
Great job of weaving the point into this very interesting story! I enjoyed this.
11/05/06
Absolutely wonderful, and fascinating to anyone (like me) who fancies linguistic play. I enjoyed this very, very much.
I especially liked this leasson learned: "The only thing that stands, even if it doesn’t tickle our ears, is the Teacher’s version." You did a wonderful job of using a simple event to illustrate some profound truths.
11/07/06
I loved how you took a fascinating story yet something familiar and created a nice devotional. I like your voice behind the words - very crisp.:)
11/07/06
I liked the feeling that the narrator still wasn't totally proficient in English. I also enjoyed the moment when he realized the meaning behind the words he had memorized. My only suggestion would be that maybe you would have wanted to leave the applications a little more hidden so that we could have our own 'aha!' moment when the meaning hit us. Very cute story. Can you guess what will be stuck on my mind all afternoon now?? ;)