The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
Thank you for this. I think you left something out of this sentence: "It is those gifts we are to give our message." but you know, the exercise of having to go back to read it to find out what was missing actually made the statement more powerful for me. Well done.
Great message! A few things made me really stumble, such as not realizing that the MC was just visiting and that she was a GIRL until the middle to end, but other than that this has a great tone. Good job!
10/28/06
Your simple title was very appropriate. God can use our talents to forward the cause of missions without actually becoming a 'missionary'. Most importantly, serve God faithfully on the PATH on which He leads us.
10/31/06
This is really cool. I enjoyed your piece very much.