The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/06
No prophet is without honour except in his own country - it would be tough going back - I like how you tied your beginning to your end, love your title and the name of the product, though I am sure "her Majesty will not be amused!".
I like how you began each section in a similar way. Great story with a great point!
10/30/06
I thought this piece did a wonderful job of showing how anyone from anywhere with any background can be used by God. It only takes a willing heart. Nicely written with a great message.
10/30/06
good journey. I enjoyed this read.
10/30/06
This was very well done. I loved the title and I really liked the way you showed the development of this character. This was very well written.