The Official Writing Challenge
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10/27/06
I really enjoyed this story. I also liked the verse you included at the end. Nice job.
This reads like a true story. I really hope it is. It was entertaining, yet held a message. Thanks for sharing.
10/28/06
I really enjoyed your story. I did stumble just a step over your first 'hello'. Maybe the comma's and quotation marks could be left out. So minor. Your message was strong, and it was an enjoyable read.