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10/28/06
What a wonderful and heartbreaking picture of the real world a missionary faces. Great job.
10/28/06
I liked the different settings portrayed in the different stanzas. Stark reminders of the price some have to pay to share what we received so freely.
10/29/06
The missionary's life is a call to sacrifice as you have portrayed so clearly in your poem. You have managed to give a sombre tone to the poem as befits the theme.
11/01/06
Sometimes reality has to be stated. These verses work well.
11/01/06
This is an amazing work of art. You brough the message and emotion across very vividly and clearly. Good title too.
This is a good reminder of what missionaries often face. Thank you for sharing.