The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/06
This is a poetic prayer, and touches on many of the hopes and fears we all have. The poetry can be improved, but the prayer cannot...it's beautiful! Thank you for sharing it.
10/27/06
I especially liked the last two stanzas. Taking the talents God has given us and using them to touch others and point them to the way - I think that's exactly what the Lord expects of us.
11/02/06
I'm going to give you DAVEY for the third paragraph. It seems to echo the "missionary" heart, to be a rainbow, reflecting God's promise so that there may be other rainbows....