The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/06
I liked your comparison of the Holy Spirit to the wind and how its effects are tailored according to each need. I felt that the opening paragraph was really not necessary. Your poem carried the message well.
Nicely done, Laurie. This is calming...and reassuring. My favorite stanza:

With each creation so unique,
The Wind adjusts its force and speed.
For those resistant, those who seek,
Its flow depends upon the need.