The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/06
We were created for mission - that's why God put us, and left us here, on this plant. Thanks for this well-written reminder. One of things you didn't say, but I though was about the missionaries who like Zidane, are disqualified, because they DO get tired, frustrated and do stupid things which might not have happened if the "spectators" were completing their mission - no excuse for either of them. Good job!
10/26/06
What I liked - the layout of this article was great. The beginning set the stage for a great reminder of our roles as Christians. Very creative.
What I might change- really nothing stood out. I like the story as is:) Well written- clear and not too preachy.
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10/27/06
Good Word. Well written and communicated. God bless.
10/30/06
A very good point and your comparison was apt. Thanks for this excellent reminder, and thanks for sharing this.