The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the narrative style here, and the little touches like the delicate tea set which really provide your readers with a visual context. I'm less sure of the liklihood of the story of the Nazi gendarme taking in the Jewish girl, and reading the Bible to seems implausible to me, but history is not my strong point. Entertaining and touching story.
I liked the silence as fragile as the teacup that he dared not break. Very descriptive words.
This was a very touching story. Good job.
Very well told! We should not be jealous when someone comes to the Lord through another's efforts, even if it happened by accident.