The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/06
You held me all the way through, this was quite a story-with a chuckle or two thrown in!
10/19/06
This is some GREAT story tellin! Awesome work! What a joy to read!
10/21/06
Recent current events have given the RCMP the black eye - I'm so glad the mounties came out on top here! Not to mention, this is a great story, well-written!
10/23/06
“But this here mule was payment for...” Inadvertently, Pete had incriminated himself.

The best line in there...not really. Everything was amazing about this piece. I loved it.
10/23/06
I loved it, such a light-hearted piece for you! Highly entertaining and full of great characters.
10/23/06
I enjoyed this amusing piece very much! Thanks so much for sharing it!
10/23/06
A very entertaining story, Ann. It flowed well, kind of rushed at the end, but alas, 750 words. This was excellently written; smooth, descriptive, alive. I enjoyed it very much.
10/23/06
I enjoyed this tale! Great job!
10/23/06
Yea, Canada! ;) An amusing tale with interesting characters. Loved your title!
Fun story! I love the line about how he hadn't signed up for tea parties, hehe!