The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/06
Attention grabber! Good job.
10/23/06
Very good! I enjoyed this, and your last line was awesome.
10/24/06
Great story Val! Poignant and very entertaining! (well written too, I might add - good work!) :)

At least, that's my gut reaction. ;)

10/24/06
Not sure I got the Pharoah connection very well. I loved how she found the sure fire way to keep the lady safe. Gut reaction! ;) Very cute conscience story.
10/24/06
So witty and original! You had some fun with names, and I always get a big kick out of that.
10/26/06
Congratulations Val! Your in the book! This is very well written. Great job!
10/26/06
Too funny! You obviously had a lot of fun playing with words here - and the rest of us enjoyed it too.

CONGRATULATIONS!
I love it! I didn't get the play on Connie's name until I got to Migh Way and had to check her name. Too clever! Great entry!