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10/21/06
Clever twist. I wouldn't have thought of a guardian angel as a policeman - but hey, why not? Good application too.
10/23/06
This is really cute. I like this.
This is clever for sure!! Nice dialogue. I wonder if you could have left off the admonition at the end...your message might have been just as effective without it. Liked this disclosure of the angel:

“An angel, yes. I am Jerohd of the Virtue Squad, your guardian angel- or one of them.”

“One of them?”

“Most Christians only need one. Then there are those... special situations- like yours.”

“Oh.”