The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
Very good point! But hate to think of a loving God as One who keeps an eye on us just to "catch us" doing something wrong. However, something to think about.
10/21/06
A healthy fear of God would do us all a world of good! I enjoyed your concise devotional. Dividing it up into a couple of paragraphs with spaces between would make it more appealing to the eye.
I found this a little short, but your message is good. You should focus on spacing between some of the thoughts to make it more readable. I agree though... we may need to be more concious of God's laws at times in our lives.
Thanks for sharing.