The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
A beautiful and loving story of sacrifice, courage, and witnessing. Well done.
10/21/06
Good Job. You showed the tension well. One little typo - 'sines' instead of 'sins'. Otherwise, good work.
Great story! I was surprised there was no mention of "The Messiah", but good job.
10/22/06
I truly enjoyed this story - especially the witness to the Jews. It definitely seemed realistic and "effective" - as Jew who converted to Christianity, I can truly say your discussion of that was something I might have related to! The drama in this story was palpable and engrossing. A great read!
10/24/06
Wonderful!

Consider ending it with "...Magda made her own sacrifice." Leaves your readers with that "gulp" factor.

I really like this genre of stories, and you did it exceptionally well.
10/25/06
I can't say anything but, "Beautiful!" I was there...and there is no higher praise for a writer. Wonderfully written!
10/25/06
Really is a beautiful story, thank you for sharing.