The Official Writing Challenge
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Love the creativity, love the voice. I understand the spelling thing of a seven year old but I did stumble a couple of times. Had to read carefully to catch everything. Overall, well done.
Great story! I'm curious whether this was really written by a 7-yo, or more likely, fiction. But either way, good job!
Definitely a creative take on this - your voice/language seems to be JUST right! I also stumbled some on the language, but I'm guessing that was part of your goal (or at least something you were expecting!). The innocence of the child is captured so vividly here!
I really enjoyed this. Reminded me of old journal entries.
Awwwww.....sweet little fella. This is tender and strong, all in the same breath. Loved the spelling idiosyncrasies, which made the whole thing special!