The Official Writing Challenge
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This was cool. A really fun read... I enjoyed the twist in the tail. Well written!
10/21/06
You had me fooled until almost the end - great description and a clever twist. Good job.
What a fun story! I'm glad that I finished it, as I didn't "suspect" the twist at the end. Great job!
I really enjoyed this. It brought a happy smile to my face!! Job well done!
Fun! Cute! Strong lead and the ending left me smiling!!

I really liked this... I will be referring back to this story for those moments when I need a good laugh.
Thank you so much for this light-hearted story.
Really well done.