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This story kept me riveted the entire time! The verse at the end was absolutely perfect. What an amazing story. It shows us what Jesus did for us but in a more modern-day way. When reading the situation like you wrote it, it seems so incredibly dumb to reject the offer. Yet many do, just in a different context. This was amazing! Thank you for sharing your amazing talent!
10/20/06
I could smell the sweat! Very good.
10/24/06
Due to this being written in the Masters Level, I hereby find it highly unrealistic that you would forget your "r" in "Your Honor". However, aside from that one major flaw (minor for beginners), I find this to be intriguing, entertaining and suspenseful from beginning to end! An excellent and enjoyable read! Thank you for your (hopefully(?) great sense of humor. Good Job!
10/24/06
Excellent symbolism. Good job. God bless.
07/03/08
Wow that was a beautiful and realistic reminder of how many people refuse God's offer of salvation on the grounds of it sounding illogical. Good job!