The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
I loved seeing the tender heart of this officer. I was a little confused at the end as to who he recognized her to be. Probably just my lack of police knowledge. The setting seemed very realistic.
10/21/06
Beautiful! Just beautiful...and I wept. So touching, so emotional; I loved it. God Bless.
10/22/06
Wow! The reference to Rahab clued me in. Well done - you had me hanging right to the end.
Powerfully written---This should score high!
12/01/06
So ... we love the same story! Thanks for liking my old version (The Priceless Prostitute) - I really enjoyed your modern one. ;)