The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/06
I agree with Mid. This is a great story of the love God expects us to share, but some of the quote marks and italics seemed out of place.
I also, sort of got lost in the beginning.

I like the story.
10/23/06
Loved this! What a great story, very touching, to think what a difference it made to Misty.
10/24/06
You tell a good story. Very moving and entertaining. God bless.
10/25/06
The phrase "Jesus with skin on" is wonderful.

I'll echo what's been said here before: italics for thoughts, quotation marks for dialog.

I hope that I have a few students who think of me kindly this way.
This was a very moving article. I felt so bad for Misty. Nicely done!