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Your poem is well-crafted and very touching. Great job!
10/20/06
Yes, very sweet. Good rhythm and rhyme, and your message of love, dreams and hope came through very clearly. Good work.
10/21/06
Sounds like a folksong. A very touching folksong, by the way. I like it very much.
A beautiful poem of hope for a newborn!
You do a new mom proud. This is well written, with good rhyme and meter. I liked this touching piece a lot!
10/24/06
Great poem. One of Dav's Favs this week!
10/24/06
Oh, wow--this is a real lump-in-the-throat piece, and just beautifully written. One of my favorites this week, for sure!
10/25/06
Wow Jan! This IS great! Gave me chills! I love the format and the difference choice of words between the verses.

Beautiful job!
10/25/06
This was beautiful! Very touching and heartfelt. Great job! I loved the flow of it.
10/25/06
Touching, nicely done poetry. Thanks for sharing.
This is touching and beautiful.
10/25/06
Very sweet and touching. Thanks for sharing it. Well done!
10/25/06
How bittersweet! This is well-crafted poetry. Very nice! I really like it!
10/26/06
I love this, Jan! What a beautiful poem, wonderfully crafted. Nice job!
11/13/06
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