The Official Writing Challenge
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10/20/06
I've had this happen at the Toronto Home Show. It was TERRIFYING. I could identify!! The ending seemed to be a bit tacked on, but I did like the idea that the story obvious was repeated often to the children as they grew up and the positive influence that had on their lives.
10/21/06
Good imagery and great story idea. I got a little lost trying to follow the part where the children actually come up missing, but I liked the story and the policeman as a clown. I'm not sure that the last paragraph enhanced the story. I like it better without. Good effort.