The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story reminded me of the importance of cherishing all of our relationships, and expressing that love regularly. Thanks for writing!
10/16/06
I agree with Rebecca--this was a reminder that I needed to read today. Thanks!
10/17/06
Well written. I think it would help if a long line were drawn in a space to bring us out of the flashback.
10/18/06
As a "Reader" I thought: "I bet the dog was hers; a gift from her parents, after she had no doubt begged and pleaded for it when she was younger...but now that she was grown up (or so she thought) was neglecting her duties. My thoughts as a Writer, however: very well written, good message and on target topic-wise.
10/18/06
Very touching. I wonder if there is some sort of teenage or kids' magazine that could use this?