The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
A very unique and different take on "fire fighter"...which at first I thought was very farfetched from the Challenge topic...but on second thought, I guess you nailed it - topic-wise. Nicely done, and loved the solitude scene; restful and serene.
10/14/06
This piece has a smooth, peaceful quality to it. A minor clip here and there but overall, a creative take on topic. I think every woman can definitely relate - must of us really are expert firefighters, especially when it comes to our families. Nicely done.
Ah, I remember those days of stress before a wedding (my sister's, in my case). Great story!