The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
You almost lost me before the Main Course...I was ready to hang it up before I got to the Story. Storyline was great...I would have suggested just doing the story without all the screenwriting, etc. but what do I know? Liked the story! Good take on Topic, and creative.
Very creative! Cute story.
10/14/06
I really enjoyed invisioning this set! What a great job! And what a great message. I never have thought of a firemans suit as armor! Cool! Welllll done!
10/16/06
I liked this idea. The boy talking to his mom with the firefighter in the background. I wonder if it could be developed even more - maybe with a bit more emotion? I loved the water gun at the end. If I were the Mom I would react quite strongly to that one! ;)
10/16/06
Absolutely precious, and one of the best analogies I've read here. I loved it.
10/16/06
Definitely creative - and a great analogy, especially out of the mouth of a child!! I like how you approached this.
10/16/06
Nice story, and it was uniquely done. I enjoyed reading this.
I loved the way you drew the parallel between our "fire" suit and the fireman's. What a great way to teach and instill the importance of getting suited up and being prepared.

Your writing has also spurred me on to thanksgiving as I realize how God has such a plan of protection in place for me.

I can totally see this skit being used in a church pre-sermon setting.

May God continue to bless your pen!

Bonnie


This was absolutely wonderful! I truly enjoyed reading this. It would be quite fun to see it acted out! Keep up the good work!
10/18/06
As someone else mentioned, you almost lost me with the 'setting up', but once I got to the 'story', I LOVED it! Great way to look at the Armour!
10/18/06
Very creative. I really enjoyed this. I liked how the firefighter's actions coincided with the boy's narration. I would enjoy seeing this performed.
10/18/06
What a sweet change. I loved it. Well done