The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this story! Right on topic, tells it like it is, and made an important point! Job well done! Nicely written also.
I like it! Well told! Nice and tight - No wasted words! Very good job! Each of your characters are real people that are relatable! Good writing!
Nice and tight, good story, albeit a little predictable, but a great take on the subject.
Very good story and "spot on" for the topic. I liked your view of volunteer fire fighters. I think they're superheroes, too!