The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the phrase 'I need fire'. It's one a poet can get hold of and run with it. Be careful of spelling errors. There were several. I got a little confused between the needing of the fire and the escaping from the fire. You might want to work on clarifying that in polishing this poem. Keep working on this. It's worth it!
I like this approach to the topic. I like the style of writing! I experienced the feeling of the message. Good poetry!