The Official Writing Challenge
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10/15/06
Very thought-provoking - great use of imagery to make your point. I enjoyed this!
Captivating images! I can really see those fires along the ridge of the cavern and those individual fire fighters, each so skillfully described! Very creative! Sure glad I was able to get back on to read this!
10/18/06
Very good! I definitely see your point, but you made it enjoyable and fun to read. I love the way you took this serious subject and made it easy to digest. Thanks for sharing this.
10/18/06
This is excellent! The first couple of paragraphs, in my humble opinion, were not the best way to start this entry. Still an amateur here, I might have started first with the beginning of paragraph 3, then brought in the exposition/background of paragraphs 1 and 2. But once I 'got started' I was hooked and found this to be a wonderful read! Wonderful job!
10/19/06
You have some profound truths in here, Sharlyn. Well done.