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10/12/06
What a good parable. You've addressed the different senses well - the light, smell, gritty taste etc - you put your reader right in the scene.
10/12/06
This is an excellent way to illustrate the truth of Jesus being the only way. Thanks for your creativity in dealing with a topic that is common among many in the world today.
10/12/06
Wow! What an amazing story! I love the parallel you did between Jesus and the firefighter. Even the girl's response that it is "intolerant" to say there is only one way. You have talent. I loved it!!!
10/15/06
Excellent - a modern parable, gritty and hard-hitting, without any element of preaching or interpretation. It spoke very powerfully for itself. I hope this will see print in one form or another.
10/16/06
This brings out the foolishness of those who do not follow the one and only true Way. Great job! Good point.
10/18/06
This is wonderfully amazing and amazingly wonderful!! Awesome in every way. So effective on every level!!