The Official Writing Challenge
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10/12/06
Wow! Like the concept of the smoke carrying daddy up and up and putting him all around us. One of Dave's Favs for that picture.
10/13/06
Such a lovely thought, riding on the smoke to a cloud; but on resurrection Day - a much better scenario; being in the flesh ON a cloud with Jesus. Nice story, on target topic-wise, and very well written.