The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, what wonderful images! How did you ever think of this great OT story in connection with this theme?? What creativity and skill!! Great! Love it!
I agree--beautiful use of images & powerful!
I never would have connected this chapter with firefighting. Had you just read it in your daily devotions? Anyway, it was a very well-written poem. It flowed nicely, and had great imagery.
10/16/06
Doesn't take much to start the grumbling and rebellion when the setting is right, does it! Great warning to us not to participate in that sort of thing to any degree! Thanks for making me think.
10/16/06
This was awesome--I loved your poetic imagery--and the assonance, the alliteration, the rhythm...a fine, fine example of free verse.
10/16/06
How amazing is this? Such stark and memorable imagery, and such a message! Very creative. No wonder this is in masters!
11/13/06
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