The Official Writing Challenge
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03/21/05
Very creative take on "leadership." Believable "ramblings" of a fifteen-year-old. Held my interest all the way - Well done.
Blessings, Lynda
03/21/05
Very creative! The thought process was spot-on for a fifteen-year-old.
I liked the voice of the writer, the 15 year old. Having work with teens extensively, I find they do have deep and intense ideas often. We don't always give them credit for this depth and I'm glad you gave her this strong voice.
03/26/05
Oh, I remember being fifteen. LOL, my mother was a saint- listening to all my senseical (new word) and nonsensical nattering. But, just like the Lord she never grew weary of me or my inquisitive nature. Yes, if I'm ever a leader, I would love to be like my parents too. Exceptional write!! - Nancy
03/28/05
Loved your rambling! The words sound like they would come from a 15 year old, but the wisdom is too advanced for one so young. Thanks for gently reminding the parents that we are to be like shepherds to our children. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
03/28/05
This is awesome! I really enjoyed it! Thanks, Cheri
04/03/05
Very creative! It encourages me to be more like Jesus in my own parenting. Thanks Sally.