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09/14/06
Great truth in a compelling rhyme. Good job.
09/16/06
Really enjoyed this, though stanza 4 rocked the rhythm about a bit. yeggy
09/18/06
A Masters entry...well, in 4th paragraph an "an" instead of an and; and "scene and been" don't rhyme, but all in all...I liked it; made perfect sense; told the story, and was an enjoyable read. We underlings just expect perfection up here in Level 4...so we get "picky" about the smallest things. (Sorry) But I liked it...flaws and all! Very, very much!
09/19/06
This is so well done. Thank you for sharing it.
09/19/06
The whole of our faith, summarized in just a few well-crafted stanzas--this is marvelous.
A comprehensive poem; you packed a lot in here! Your thoughts flow well - the only place I tripped was "And ugly, hellish seed" instead of "an" (minor typo). Good job w/ this!
09/19/06
So succintly covering the history of man, and so beautifully done! This definitely kept my interest from beginning to end! Wonderful writing!
Good job, Melanie. A fine poem worthy of a win. Congratulations and God's blessings.
11/13/06
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