The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/06
Beginning with the third word "met" instead of "meant"; I began to read a tale of suspense, of distrust, of mystery - then finally murder and suicide. Long on intrigue, but short on Garden topic. Very Creative, however; but could use a little editing. Wow! What a ride!
09/16/06
Suspenseful? Yes! Heart-wrenching? For sure! It left me with a heaviness hoping that I had misread the ending, but obviously not. I'm a little concerned with the way it starts out as a first person narrative and ends with April taking her own life -- you may want to go back and rework that aspect of the story. What a tragic story, full of emotion. How easily we misunderstand one another's intentions. Good work!