The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/06
Very visual story! :) The beginning of a love story, for sure. I would have liked to read more ... seems almost unfinished. However, often times it's difficult to develop a whole story with the 750 word limit. Very nice work! God bless! :)
09/16/06
A bit confusing, but sweet story. I guess it was the title...but just one person's opinion. Nice job, however.
09/17/06
Did the sun rising through the trees remind him of her eyes? Not quite sure about that. Beautiful descriptions throughout though. Sounds like the hike was well worth it!
10/04/06
Did the sun rising through the trees remind him of her eyes? No. It was the yellow sunrays dancing on the blue water. Wish I'd had more words than just 750 to develop the story and save confusion. Oh well. Another story, another time.