The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/06
Very nice! I loved the intrigue ... kept me wanting to know more. It would have been nice if Poppy had confessed to her husband and together they made an attempt to embrace their new neighbor. But nevertheless, it was a delightful story well told! :)
09/16/06
Strange thoughts go through my mind. The things he buried are just the things I'd want to keep close to me - if I loved her; her Bible, etc. However, everyone to their own tastes. Nice suspense story. Well done.
09/16/06
PS: on second thought, perhaps he turned against God because He allowed her to die; so buried her bible. No! he would have burned it. Sorry, I keep on pondering. But yes, invite him to dinner!
09/16/06
Gotta love snoopy neighbors! But, I'm glad she decided to invite him for dinner. Good story.
09/17/06
Great description here! You did a wonderful job of moving the story along. I love also that she invited him to dinner. Great story!