The Official Writing Challenge
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03/21/05
Very nicely written. It flowed very well and had an excellent point. :-)
Excellent grasp of childlike speech patterns!
03/21/05
LOL - This was a lot of fun. Great dialect, smooth writing, kept my interest from the title to the end.
Well done!
Lynda
03/21/05
This story was so much fun, and it was very beautifully written! Definitely a contender for first place!
03/21/05
This was very nicely written and quite creative.
Interesting and a good read. It had a gentle flow and realistic characters. I enjoyed it very much. Nicely done.
03/27/05
Loved the story. The characters seemed real and I could almost see myself walking along with them observing it all. You are a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing your gift with us.