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The discourse between the Father and the Son is very interesting. This is a very visual piece. I think it might be a bit difficult to tie it in to the "Garden" theme except by inference. A lot of imagination and though went into this. There are some problems with capitalization that bothered me a bit, but after having read it twice, it became less bothersome. Nice work! :)
Nice job on the plan of salvation, but shy on Garden topic. I like the Bible version better, but yours is also intriguing...thanks for sharing.
Very creatively done and shows a knowledge of Hebrew customs. Interesting!
Very nice dialog and a powerful reminder of Jesus' love for His Bride.