The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/06
The point where the wailing escaped her was so touching. Such agony! It was a turning point. I didn't want to see her come too far too quickly, but I loved the breakthrough. Good work!
09/15/06
Beautiful story -- full of feeling and emotion! I love the way you let healing trickle ... it's so much more realistic. Very nicely written and communicated. This reader was captured. :)
09/16/06
You touched my heart with this one. One could just feel the raw emotion the girl was experiencing. Very well done.
09/16/06
Fantastic read! My tears flow freely. Great story. Well done.
09/19/06
Your description of the garden, the effort and the raw emotions pulled me in. Thank you for this lovely story of healing.
09/21/06
You did a wonderful job with this piece, gently letting the ideas and emotions develop, preparing the reader for the revelation.
01/14/07
This is the first time I've read any of your entries, but what a delight it has been! Beautifully written! I'm wondering if you write poetry. You have a poetic quality in your prose!