The Official Writing Challenge
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09/14/06
The point where the wailing escaped her was so touching. Such agony! It was a turning point. I didn't want to see her come too far too quickly, but I loved the breakthrough. Good work!
09/15/06
Beautiful story -- full of feeling and emotion! I love the way you let healing trickle ... it's so much more realistic. Very nicely written and communicated. This reader was captured. :)
You touched my heart with this one. One could just feel the raw emotion the girl was experiencing. Very well done.
09/16/06
Fantastic read! My tears flow freely. Great story. Well done.
09/19/06
Your description of the garden, the effort and the raw emotions pulled me in. Thank you for this lovely story of healing.
09/21/06
You did a wonderful job with this piece, gently letting the ideas and emotions develop, preparing the reader for the revelation.
This is the first time I've read any of your entries, but what a delight it has been! Beautifully written! I'm wondering if you write poetry. You have a poetic quality in your prose!