The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
I usually bypass stories that are bunched together with no spacing separating the paragraphs. I call them "reader unfriendly"; however I'm glad I didn't bypass this one. It was a "page turner" so to speak; waiting to see what would happen next! I kept waiting for the topic "River" to come up...then in the end it did. A heartwrenching story, for sure; but suspenseful... I enjoyed the read. Good job!
09/10/06
Yes, this was well written. I figured the river was not going to be there at all. In the end it was, though not very strongly. Definately a heart-wrenching story. Good work tugging at the emotions.