The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 725 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
09/09/06
Good explanation of God; however, story-wise; I spent the first half of the story trying to place which one of them was Nick...it kept bothering me that a name was thrown in there and I thought perhaps a typo. Then, midway through a "Nick" does appear. But kinda late...I'd spent too much time wondering who he was. But nice story and well written.
09/10/06
Thoughtful story. The boys searching was intense and the 'grandpa's' explanations were thoughtful. One missing word here: "So we would have to perfect for God to be fair." Good story.
09/13/06
One of the best explanations of God I've ever heard. Yes, some of the back and forth got a little confusing. However, a Good Gospel DAVEY for you! Enjoyed it!