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Good explanation of God; however, story-wise; I spent the first half of the story trying to place which one of them was kept bothering me that a name was thrown in there and I thought perhaps a typo. Then, midway through a "Nick" does appear. But kinda late...I'd spent too much time wondering who he was. But nice story and well written.
Thoughtful story. The boys searching was intense and the 'grandpa's' explanations were thoughtful. One missing word here: "So we would have to perfect for God to be fair." Good story.
One of the best explanations of God I've ever heard. Yes, some of the back and forth got a little confusing. However, a Good Gospel DAVEY for you! Enjoyed it!