The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/06
This fantastic story desperatly cries out for a Name and a Scripture to read to verify this truth! Unbelievers and those unfamiliar with biblical history will never know, will think this science fiction, and perhaps not even know when, where why or how this happened, or IF it did. Great story, very creative and well written except for "forgot"...which should be "forget". Thanks for this great read.
09/09/06
PS: by "name"...I mean the name of the river; and the Bible reference from which this is based.
09/10/06
This was excellent writing! I thoroughly enjoyed reading every bit of it. Great to hear that story from the point of view of the river! Terrific writing.