The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 645 times
Member Comments
I loved your opening! We do need a lot more followers - or at least people who know they aren't leaders! You may want to watch your grammar and punctuation. You had a few run together sentences in this article that left me a bit confused. However, you had some very good comments to make.
Thought-provoking article. Good job!
Good article, and the book sounds good too!
Interesting story. I suspect you knew the float designer even better than you knew Cindy. There's a saying, "You can get a lot done if you don't mind who gets the credit." Cindy didn't come off as a leader, but as a very popular girl that took all the credit that she could. This is the dog-eat-dog world, you know. Or is it our Father's world and we sees our motives and blesses us when we minister to others. Cindy's benefit was her popularity. But years have gone by and the land is filled with women who have nothing but memories and regrets. There's a sadness woven through this story.