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Very deep waters, here. I think I could read this many times and still not grasp all the messages woven in! Gave me chills....
I'm intrigued, but confused as to the intrinsic meaning of this piece. I feel like I need Cliff Notes! LOL! Are you comparing the emptiness of false religion to the truth? Or are you presenting alternate routes to eternity apart from Christianity? I'd love you to post a comment after the hinting and hinging is over.
11/13/06
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