The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/06
I love your opening line. It pulls you in. The flow was nice also.
Interesting conclusions from a movie-watcher! My family is into inserting movie quotes in everyday conversation but I never remember them...unless they're from "You've Got Mail."
;-D

Anyway, personally I'd like more development on Jacob's experience - I think you could expand your commentary on this point and come up with a powerful devotional!